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Overlooking a Brook With a Spectacular Look

My house up on the hill overlooking the brook With a spectacular look He will appreciate what awaits On the other side of the gate My little angel thinks our house is the first-rate That it was our fate that brought us to this special place To begin our life free of sin as we can hardly contain are grin To stop and take it all in Between the view and what I have shared with you It's clear to see why this makes us so happy to see The way our love has grown up to be The most beautiful place for me Is a home full of love, and respect That affects all the beautiful things going off inside of me To ask God for any more would undermine this awesome score When in the beginning we were so poor The only way I will ever leave Is when God takes my last breath from me We have weaved our story in all of God’s glory Because of the choices, we made long ago This is why we both know our love will grow strong enough to last The woods are what makes all of this so special wild and free Miles of memories that we made along the way We will never let them fade away As we pray to God and thank Him for such a heavenly place Where you can see the angels play on any given day I just hope that God picked out a spectacular view From upon a hill overlooking a brook with that spectacular look That we have come to know All things are possible when you have the right flow We come to know God who will save our soul

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Date: 5/7/2018 9:33:00 AM
I like this line in particular: My little angel thinks our house is the first-rate That it was our fate that brought us to this special place because when we climbed a fence to look at some property, both my husband and I turned at the same time and said, "we have found our place."
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Jack Cooper
Date: 5/7/2018 11:52:00 AM
That is so cool to hear that kind of stuff as a poet to know that what I write really does talk to people and in the way in which the poem was intended. Thank you for sharing that with me as a poet you know it's one of the few things we receive for sharing with others take care.

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