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Overlooked

OVERLOOKED Eager to watch flying beauty of flocks of egret overlooked chirping sparrows,I truly regret. Astonished, as large birds form V-shape so fast My notice escapes dance of small birds on dust. Whelmed in marvels of plumage of peacock. On a lonesome solitary rigid rock a patient lone snail sliding at slow rate. I repent as I failed to appreciate. Enchanted on distant spectacular view. Grass glistening glittering with drops of dew sighed as I ignored and just forgot to raise idle unwilling eyes to adore and praise. 11/06/18 'Overlooked Beauty' Contest by Jesse Rowe

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Date: 11/6/2018 12:32:00 PM
Lovely verse Anisha, there is so much beauty around us that we sometimes overlook. Good luck. Tom.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/7/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom for your visit n appreciation
Date: 11/6/2018 11:15:00 AM
And that was beautiful; wonderful imagery, a light and fun poem. Well penned.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Kiser for visit n appreciation

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