Overheated

Energy draining
Hot air is circulated
Life is going slow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Lethargy is felt in these few lines, Alexander. That's how it feels at the moment in Malta, especially in mid-afternoons! // paul
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July 1, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Malta would be fantastic at the moment - it is just a sweltering humid London!
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Sounds like a hot and humid summer!! I enjoyed this.
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July 1, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Thanks. It is horribly hot for a day at work, so the words are ringing true!
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