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Overheated

Energy draining Hot air is circulated Life is going slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/30/2015 5:35:00 PM
Lethargy is felt in these few lines, Alexander. That's how it feels at the moment in Malta, especially in mid-afternoons! // paul
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:06:00 AM
Malta would be fantastic at the moment - it is just a sweltering humid London!
Date: 6/30/2015 2:43:00 PM
Sounds like a hot and humid summer!! I enjoyed this.
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:09:00 AM
Thanks. It is horribly hot for a day at work, so the words are ringing true!

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