Overdone

I guess it’s good to look unique
Or have a special glow,
But when one’s face makes her a freak,
It’s something she should know.

Like Michael Jackson in his prime
Who couldn’t see the truth,
The “tanning mom” has wasted time
To get back to her youth.

Forget about her kid for now – 
The way that mom appears
Is worse than movies that allow
The ghouls that conjure fears.

Why someone’d do herself such harm
Is way beyond my ken,
Although such models of alarm
Come forward now and then.

A little tan can add allure
But when one tips the scale,
The mirror should reveal for sure
It’s better to be pale!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pritts Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 5:56 PM
That woman went far beyond rediculous. And if her child has any repercussions from it she could be facing charges. But back to the poem. It was well written and addressed the issue very well. Thanks for sharing. Rockman
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Nice piece madam!!!
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Well done Ilene. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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