Overcoming Overwhelmingness

Was always waiting for the rat race to slow down
When will the clutter of life get cleaned up
Surely the pace will pause at some point
And I won’t have such an overflowed cup

Constantly finding myself at a fork in the road
Always seemed stalled at life's intersection
The daily deluge of to do's is daunting
Feeling like Stretch Armstrong yanked in every direction

Then realized there is another path
Have the ability to relate to things in a new way
I harness the power in my hands 
To choose how I approach each and every day 

But how can I achieve this new state of mind?
First step is letting go of control
Accepting things as they are is the new goal 
Tornado of life no longer swallowing me whole 

Next have to shift away from all or nothing thinking 
Realize everything isn’t black or white 
Starting to see the vast array of gray 
Opening up a new line of sight 

What a change to find joy in what I once wished away
Now I welcome the rat race with open arms
Relishing in the sweet nectar of normalities
Donning my newfound thoughts as charms

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Date: 12/2/2022 6:49:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Mike! Its so easy to get caught in the rat race. My attitude is keep it as simple as possible….if my mind is cluttered so is my life! Written beautifully….I enjoyed! Debx
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Mike Oleary
Date: 12/27/2022 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Deb
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