Overcome the Mountain

Came upon a mountain so vast,
Came upon a valley so wide,
In due time I knew it would pass,
Humility became my guide,
The stillness silenced all of me,
With limitless possibilities.


By: sabina nicole
contest
written: 9/23/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:29 AM
My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Sabina
Quigley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Great write Sabina. Congratulations on your win
Freeman Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 9:28 AM
Sabina, a great message in metaphor, my friend, humility will always silence the human foible, revealing infinities of unlimited possibilities...jolly good show. Agape, Moses
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October 1, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Congrats Sabina on a wonderful win with these lovely lines depicting the photo luv..
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