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we had some good times and we had some bad times we hated each other and we loved each other we are stuck in this wed trying so hard to give we are frustrated and tiered because we are sick of the lies i loved you loved me but your the one who wanted to be free this is my story this is my song theses are the things i felt while you were gone you wasn't there when i needed you the most you were cold you have no heart you played these games so you can have some fun but i`m tiered now,and i`m done and all this pain ,and hate i have gain i know in time it will all pass away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/7/2008 1:10:00 PM
Dear Latika, I have dedicated an Acrostic POEM To YOU Title : Latika hope YOU like it YOUR POETRYSOUP FRIEND...HG
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Date: 12/7/2008 8:08:00 AM
Dear Latika, Again I Welcome YOU to POETRY SOUP This is a much better POEM but is not an Acrostic either May I suggest YOU use the Form Free Verse until YOU become better and more experienced YOUR POETRY FRIEND...HG
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