Overcome

we had some good times
and we had some bad times
we hated each other
and we loved each other 

we are stuck in this wed
trying so hard to give 
we are frustrated and tiered
because we are sick of the lies
i loved you
 loved me 
but your the one who wanted to be free

this is my story 
this is my song
theses are the things i felt while you were gone
you wasn't there when i needed you the most
you were cold you have no heart
you played these games so you can have some  fun

but i`m tiered now,and i`m done
and all this pain ,and hate i have gain
i know in time it will all pass away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 7, 2008 at 1:10 PM
Dear Latika, I have dedicated an Acrostic POEM To YOU Title : Latika hope YOU like it YOUR POETRYSOUP FRIEND...HG
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December 7, 2008 at 8:08 AM
Dear Latika, Again I Welcome YOU to POETRY SOUP This is a much better POEM but is not an Acrostic either May I suggest YOU use the Form Free Verse until YOU become better and more experienced YOUR POETRY FRIEND...HG
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