Overcast

upon looking
at the sky
a torrential
downpour was
imminent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mckenzie Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 10:53 AM
Deneen Its as thoughI see the darkened clouds now before me, well done!! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 7:26 AM
Love those dark ominous clouds just before a storm. Especially when the wind picks up and there is a feeling of electricity in the air. Great write. Love, Shar
Foulk Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 8:31 PM
I can really picture this in my mind, love the rain and a good down pour. if I'm inside. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments your so kind.
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