Over Winter Frost

Hold on,
Not all is lost, 
A setting sun 
Over winter frost, 
Diamonds glisten upon the sea,
The sand feels cool beneath our feet,
If every storm on Earth were to brew,
Every tide crash around me and you,
I'd just look into your eyes, 
And smile at how they shine,
I can't believe that you are here,
And you are mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 10:36 AM
Great poem Zoe, I enjoyed reading it...Raul
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November 15, 2008 at 2:09 PM
Another lovely write Zoe. Love the opening. Love, Nigel
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November 13, 2008 at 4:38 PM
Lovely! Marvelous imagery, flow and sublime content. Keith (a fellow Brit)
Matheny Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 2:57 PM
It's so sweet I love it!! Bye ;) By the way how i your name pronounced?
Cooper Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 8:18 AM
great verse, love this.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:30 PM
Nice reflection on love. The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Keep on writing! Karen
Jordan Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 9:21 AM
Zoe that was beautiful - such appreciation for the one you love - God Bless
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