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Over the Mountain

over the mountain into a big cloud one little cloud overcoming adversity

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Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 2:05:00 PM

hummm... interesting... SKAT

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/21/2013 4:59:00 PM

We must all cross over mountains in life, and when we feel alone it is comforting to merge into security of enfolding arms to feel protected and loved. Too, one cloud is the same as another cloud no matter the size, in humanity we are too all one species, one human genre and our poems are one poetry. Bob

Linda Jackson

Date: 8/20/2013 10:21:00 AM

I liked your poem and the theme of overcoming adversity using the images of big mountain and little cloud. Best Wishes Linda x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2013 3:42:00 AM

Great work that is very descriptive and expressive in a very few words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/20/2013 5:19:00 AM

again thank you so much, a Japanese haiku has on average 11 syllables they call Onji. The fewer word syllables to say it and have it powerful the better, so they tell me. Again, the Kudos are very much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2013 3:06:00 AM

- Nice haiku, Robert !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/20/2013 5:24:00 AM

Thank You for the OXOXOX'S one can never have enough love to fill the heart with the joy of another's most sincere concerns. I am in awe of this place called: POET'S HOUSE a place to call home for the creative at heart. Robert Henry Poulin