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Over the Falls

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I whisper to you in the quiet night So many thoughts there are to say Immersed in the corners of darkness While so long you have been away All these miles of distance and time From another life merge with today A peaceful revelation and sublime Only you would understand this way Echoes unite with comfort in a stance Words engraved one can never erase I don’t have to take a second glance I just realign my heart with what I face From another realm you take my hand Together we flow safely over the falls Our love is a constant as the water to land No matter if anyone hears our calls As time races forward and waters do rise Everything stops in our moments shared Around every corner there is a surprise Even apart, our voice for us is spared Heidi Sands 6/28/17 Placed 1st in the Jan 2019 WK2 Poetry Contest.

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Wren Rushing

Date: 1/11/2019 8:35:00 AM

A beautiful poem Heidi, congratulations on your win!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Wren! :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/11/2019 8:22:00 AM

I enjoyed this beautiful serene and flowing poem Heidi. Congrats on your win. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much John. :)

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/29/2017 2:24:00 PM

A beautifully flowing poem of love, and as can happen in love "Everything stops in our moments shared", love that line and can relate to it's meaning. Well done Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thank you very much for the comment and feedback Lenna. I am happy you like this :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/28/2017 3:25:00 PM

Such a gorgeous fall you took us on w/this emotionally intricate layering of two hearts. Beautiful and so creative, another fave, golden lady. Your poems are so evocative and stirs the heart w/joyous sensations. Reading your poetry gives me great peace. Love and hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 3:35:00 PM

Hi Freddie. I am so happy and smiling that this poem brings you peace. Thank you for the thoughtful, kind feedback on this :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/28/2017 3:11:00 PM

- A real lovely poem, Heidi - So nice to see your "nearby" pictures :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 3:34:00 PM

Hi Sunshine. Thank you very much. So happy you like it :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/28/2017 2:44:00 PM

Beautifully tranquil and flowing with love my friend. This was gorgeous Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 2:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris. Just took the photo nearby today. Not that I don't already have enough other photos lol. I appreciate your kindness and friendship always :)