Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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A photo taken nearby

Over the Falls

I whisper to you in the quiet night
So many thoughts there are to say
Immersed in the corners of darkness
While so long you have been away

All these miles of distance and time
From another life merge with today
A peaceful revelation and sublime
Only you would understand this way

Echoes unite with comfort in a stance
Words engraved one can never erase
I don’t have to take a second glance
I just realign my heart with what I face

From another realm you take my hand
Together we flow safely over the falls
Our love is a constant as the water to land
No matter if anyone hears our calls

As time races forward and waters do rise
Everything stops in our moments shared
Around every corner there is a surprise
Even apart, our voice for us is spared

Heidi Sands


6/28/17

Placed 1st in the Jan 2019 WK2 Poetry Contest.

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Wren Rushing January 11, 2019 at 8:35 AM A beautiful poem Heidi, congratulations on your win! Heidi Sands January 11, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you Wren! :)

John Gondolf January 11, 2019 at 8:22 AM I enjoyed this beautiful serene and flowing poem Heidi. Congrats on your win. John Heidi Sands January 11, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much John. :)

Lenna Walker June 29, 2017 at 2:24 PM A beautifully flowing poem of love, and as can happen in love "Everything stops in our moments shared", love that line and can relate to it's meaning. Well done Heidi :) Heidi Sands June 29, 2017 at 3:31 PM Thank you very much for the comment and feedback Lenna. I am happy you like this :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. June 28, 2017 at 3:25 PM Such a gorgeous fall you took us on w/this emotionally intricate layering of two hearts. Beautiful and so creative, another fave, golden lady. Your poems are so evocative and stirs the heart w/joyous sensations. Reading your poetry gives me great peace. Love and hugs. Heidi Sands June 28, 2017 at 3:35 PM Hi Freddie. I am so happy and smiling that this poem brings you peace. Thank you for the thoughtful, kind feedback on this :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2017 at 3:11 PM - A real lovely poem, Heidi - So nice to see your "nearby" pictures :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands June 28, 2017 at 3:34 PM Hi Sunshine. Thank you very much. So happy you like it :)

Chris Green June 28, 2017 at 2:44 PM Beautifully tranquil and flowing with love my friend. This was gorgeous Heidi Heidi Sands June 28, 2017 at 2:47 PM Thank you so much Chris. Just took the photo nearby today. Not that I don't already have enough other photos lol. I appreciate your kindness and friendship always :)