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Over Doing

Over Doing, Under Doing, never Doing enough. Every Time I try, I just fail, then I die, For Doing nothing at all Seems so right, But yet it is only Wrong. When you think that things might not go the way you planned it. The one above has all the Answers. One way or another, Getting what you need, at the right time, even if you don't understand it. But Doing too much seems Wrong as it is. But by Doing what is above, It will always be right, and never Over Doing it, Too much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 7:30:00 AM
A strong message of surrendering selfish ambition permeates this work, Eric, with an emphasis on faith to guide the way. Excellent pen! Warm regards, John.
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