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Over and Over

Why do I do this ? Over and over, I fall for you, Over and over, I try not to, Over and over, You make me fall for you, Over and over, You don't even try to, So here I go again, Falling for you again, You'll bring up again, Just to watch me fall again, I'll never fall in love again.

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 1/12/2012 11:28:00 PM

That sounds like the progression of the union of my marriage to the woman that I love. It was up again and down again to the point that we realized that's how love works. Your pin has hit the point. Sometimes I'm the tail on the donkey but at least I'm part of the body. There are also times that I'm the head or the heart or the feet that carries the weight. Either way, the cycle repeats over and over again. Any write that makes me think that much can only be graded as excellent. Thanks for the read. Rockman :-)

Trudy Mcfadden
Date: 1/12/2012 11:37:00 PM

No problem anytime, I just don't think it will ever happen again between me and this guy unless he changes,and stops using people. One day it's gonna all come back to him, and then he will feel a minor fracmint of the pain I have felt.