Over and Over

the dreamghost
repeated motions endlessly
tasks never completed
and I am
too much and not enough
right about not quite
while others gossip
at a table
the wages of labor
the weight of our lives
headstones bearing histories
as cars on the west end pass
stories told between calls
services required
a drunken cry at midnight
mistaken as love
a long drive
over a narrow road
shimmering lakes
and a call of the woods
a poem under cover seeks
the light of expression
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Levasseur Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 9:03 AM
"a drunken cry at midnight/mistaken as love." Great lines! I also enjoyed how you built a myriad of images in your retelling of the evening. Highly enjoyable.
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:49 PM
very deep writing, Mike. You excel in this form!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:09 PM
Interesting and beautiful... a thought provoking write. God bless you
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