Sidney Beck Poet Kimo

Outward Bound

OUTWARD   BOUND


marry and set course with me where we will,

wed and we will share one boat:

our rudder will be love.


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KIMO  for Dr. Ram’s contest 
“Wedding is one of the Special Events in Marriage”

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Sara Kendrick March 22, 2011 at 9:59 AM Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me...Sara

Carrie Richards March 21, 2011 at 3:43 PM Leave it to you, to do something unique, and so original !! Love it!

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2011 at 3:32 PM i love the kimo feel to it, like haiku. Great final line!!

Michael J. Falotico March 21, 2011 at 2:06 PM Beautiful write.. a winner my friend

Carolyn Devonshire March 21, 2011 at 1:32 PM Indeed, it's love that steers a relationship, hopefully into peaceful waters. You know I love the sea, Syd, and this analogy really appeals to me. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn