Outter Limit Pt2

i lie here hopin 2 lay the blame
feelin the ache and all of the pain
full of hate and disbelief
up all night
knowin i'm not gona get no no relief

cuz i own all the questions
and the needing to know why
but...
it wasn't me who delivered the lie
or was it...
thats how it makes me feel
damn ryt i got the raw end of the deal

hurt, hatred, humiliation
all side effects of your creation
no meeting of minds
no mutual respect
just deciet and neglect

always left with this
trapped in this deep dark abyss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Harris Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 7:54 AM
good poem, I enjoyed reading it today.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 3:50 AM
I like this one..Don't know if the misspelled words and slang is part of the style of the work or not..I escpecially like the last seven lines..I was delighted that you stopped by my work "The Truck Graveyard"..Sara
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