Outside the Lines



Color me outside the lines,
highlight the parts of me not easily defined

Take a crayon interest in my heart,
give a little more coloration to this innervision numbering chart

Pick a hue of your own choosing,
and princess veil the passion mystery of me perusing

Select a shade of my piqued curiosity,
color a picture of your outsider tendacies merging into me

Tilt a tint tropical 23 degrees spinning strawberry red,
that’s the torque direction of the pulse waves moving to my head

Dip a palette splash of pure rainbow desires,
and put it on a kaleidoscope acrylic canvas of aquatic fire

Feel the cool, feel the heat ... 
feel the liquid rush of lava intensity

I’m coloring you beyond the astral lines,
I’m coloring us in love, having portrait boundaries outside of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/17/2018 9:25:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, This is a well written and very romantic write. I was caught up in every word and every line. I connected with what you so skillfully wrote. I'm sure your friend just adores this write:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/17/2018 6:46:00 AM
Imaginative poetry...Well written...All the best Freddie
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