Outside Our Window

Pretty green, blue, pink, red and white colors!
My gaze bounces from one to the other.
Looking through my window, senses confer 
how sight-touch turns thoughts to my lover.

White and pink from each periwinkle;
peaking blue sky; red tomatoes, green crinkle;
growth from onions and new peppers may twinkle.
Much in window’s pane does besprinkle.

Looking out, the feeling of harmony
reminds me of love’s perfect reverie:
A special day of laboring happily
while together we played plant botany.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/18/2015 7:01:00 AM
Better than fish chips, curry, Chinese, LoL Wendy wish i had a good view, wish i could plant veggies. x
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Date: 9/30/2015 1:03:00 PM
Sweet write CayCay. So colorful.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/30/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, James. It is real and colorful and my balcony - loaded with plant life, but, alas, fall is showing her face. Thanks again for commenting ... CayCay
Date: 9/29/2015 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win CayCay
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Date: 9/30/2015 1:13:00 PM
Hi, John - I appreciate the congrats. And you ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 11:49:00 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Caycay! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:01:00 PM
CayCay, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:12:00 PM
CayCay nice win!
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Date: 9/24/2015 2:59:00 AM
Outside your window looks great better your view than mine x very good Wendy x
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/24/2015 11:08:00 AM
Yours is busy, busy, mine quiet and serene. Want to window swap? There are times when the hustle and bustle from your view would do me good! Thank you for commenting, Wendy ... CayCay
Date: 9/14/2015 12:47:00 AM
Beautifully written similes of life both inside and out. Nicely done!
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you, Dan. I am so glad you shared your uplifting reaction ... CayCay
Date: 9/13/2015 10:25:00 AM
You paint a picture with words that bring your memories alive in the reader's mind, and we too can appreciate your world filled with the colors of life. Emile.
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Date: 9/13/2015 10:44:00 AM
Your comment could not be more perfect to me. For you, my intent was well spent! It really is my view, really created by me and my love so this one is personal. Thank you so much, Emile ... CayCay
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