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Outside, Looking In

(can be spoken or sung in rhythm) Unrequited is the game not meant to be is my name round n' round is how it goes where it stops i think i know even though i hope i'm wrong i just can't stop the same old song on the outside looking in plus i'm drinking the same old gin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/23/2009 5:38:00 AM
Im with Donna on this one Margaret. Wonderful write. The only thing wrong with it is that I didn't write it myself ! Good job. -Robert
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:20:00 PM
Margaret, this poignant write shows a thoughtful depth. Nice work. Hugs, Donna
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