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Outshine the Stars

Falling stars can fall unseen, their descent defaced by brilliant beams of sunlight; expunged and erased. And yet, come nighttime, meteors outshine the stars, their demise sublime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/25/2021 10:17:00 AM
Exceptional poetry, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2021 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful, Emile. <3 Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2021 8:20:00 AM
Beautifully-expressed, Emile. There always seems such promise in a shooting star, even though we know they are dying. Nice work.
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Date: 6/25/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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