Brian Strand Poet Other

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OUTLINE

 so
  elegant
exact
  if
  plain
but
pure

  a fleeting
      fidelity
this
  pride of possession
that
disturb feelings
  though remarkably ironic
recur
   covering
the
obsessive
 in veiled irony
leaving
a slight
  rapport
 candid
  &intimate


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

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Ken Rone December 7, 2021 at 8:54 AM Thank you for defining the open verse form for me. It was very informative and PS shouls incorporate it in its dropdown list. Your piece here clever. I'm glad I came upon it this morning. - Ken