Outlet

I was always thinking too much
About good and evil and such
Fortunately sooner than later
I learned to put it down on paper...

liferhyme

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Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Clever

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2014 at 6:55 PM

this is very clever what you said here, and I'm glad I came way back to this oldie and discovered it.

Carrie Richards

April 25, 2010 at 3:33 PM

Short and to the point...but I loved this one! Congratulations on your featured poem!! Hope you've had a good weekend! :) Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 25, 2010 at 11:29 AM

Congrats Tim on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent write to feature and share with us all...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2010 at 3:07 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol

April 18, 2010 at 3:42 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to the comment below. Keep on writing! Karen

August 22, 2009 at 7:54 AM

Such is the writer. It's amazing how much of an "Outlet" it is for me. The rhyme works well in this concise poem. I like the lighthearted tone. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Karen