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Caren Krutsinger

Outhouse Wake Up Call

coldest day ever
stiff outhouse door barely shuts
rude awakening

Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019

10th grade11th grade12thhaiku

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April 10, 2019 at 6:30 PM

I have used one of these; had a cousin who still had one in the 1970's and when we visited him, we had to use it; he was way out in the country. Thanks for the memory.

April 10, 2019 at 4:10 PM

Oooh! That tickles! Fun one, Caren! ~ gw

April 9, 2019 at 10:40 PM

Thank goodness for indoor plumbing!! ;D hahaha

Caren Krutsinger

April 10, 2019 at 12:30 AM

Oh, I do love it so!

April 9, 2019 at 10:30 PM

Well done ~ fun visual ;)

Caren Krutsinger

April 10, 2019 at 12:31 AM

Thank you P.M.

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2019 at 6:02 PM

I agree with Ilene. a HA poem!!

Caren Krutsinger

April 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM

Thank you Andrea; I threw this down and did not think anything of it until later. Oh my!

April 9, 2019 at 2:33 PM

ha! you've painted a vivid picture, caren!

Caren Krutsinger

April 9, 2019 at 9:48 PM

Oh, Ilene, it was such an accident, but it worked out BRRR great!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 9, 2019 at 8:25 AM

Rude indeed. Ouch! I feel COLD! nicely done dear Caren

Caren Krutsinger

April 9, 2019 at 12:05 PM

I used to be scared to death of an outhouse, my grandparents had one.

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