Outhouse Wake Up Call

coldest day ever stiff outhouse door barely shuts rude awakening

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 6:30:00 PM

I have used one of these; had a cousin who still had one in the 1970's and when we visited him, we had to use it; he was way out in the country. Thanks for the memory.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2019 4:10:00 PM

Oooh! That tickles! Fun one, Caren! ~ gw

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 4/9/2019 10:40:00 PM

Thank goodness for indoor plumbing!! ;D hahaha

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 12:30:00 AM

Oh, I do love it so!

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/9/2019 10:30:00 PM

Well done ~ fun visual ;)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 12:31:00 AM

Thank you P.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2019 6:02:00 PM

I agree with Ilene. a HA poem!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Andrea; I threw this down and did not think anything of it until later. Oh my!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/9/2019 2:33:00 PM

ha! you've painted a vivid picture, caren!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 9:48:00 PM

Oh, Ilene, it was such an accident, but it worked out BRRR great!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/9/2019 8:25:00 AM

Rude indeed. Ouch! I feel COLD! nicely done dear Caren

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:05:00 PM

I used to be scared to death of an outhouse, my grandparents had one.