Outdoor Lullaby

first birdsong of a newborn — open-eyed kiss 2/1/2018

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/3/2018 6:30:00 PM

Wonderful nature imagery Kim; makes me long for springtime!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2018 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Che! Spring sounds wonderful! ...hugs, Kim

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/2/2018 8:36:00 PM

Sweet imagery. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2018 9:49:00 PM

Thanks, dear Line!

John Lawless

Date: 2/2/2018 7:26:00 AM

OH YEAH!!!! What a moment....

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2018 4:41:00 PM

Thanks, John!

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/2/2018 5:03:00 AM

A scene I've witnessed many a time, beautiful, haiku, inspired one from me! https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/outdoor_lullaby_-_inspired_by_kim_rodrigues_987996

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2018 6:40:00 AM

Thank you, Mick! Children bring smiles to our faces as we experience once again the newness of life through them! Hugs...Kim

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/1/2018 9:35:00 PM

nice haiku Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 9:57:00 PM

Thanks, Lewis!