Outcome of War

Look at the hands of the boy
He held's a gun not a toy 
Look where he played
Full of bullets and granades
Tell whats his games 
Find a victim and then aim
Look what he just did
Pulled the trigger and killed a kid
Some stood up and stared 
Like none ever cared
Its normal they say
In this cruel war today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Agustin Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 23, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Louwil, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 6:03 PM
louwil, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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