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Out On The Veranda

A lap full of warm animals Out sitting on the veranda Relaxing time my rationale A lap full of warm animals At least I have their approval And glad it's not a Giant Panda A lap full of warm animals Out sitting on the veranda One cat clawing and one dog washing the cat.. Someone has to prepare lunch now...

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Date: 9/13/2013 5:21:00 PM
Love the thought, the intimacy... "a lap full of warm animals" ...what an excellent place to be.
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:08:00 PM
LOL, so glad you don't have a panda sitting on your lap too : ) Love picturing this scene
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:33:00 AM
cute cute cute, Sara. Why not the panda. I would quite like a baby panda on my lap. I wonder if it is more than 150 pounds though. In that case, I guess not!!!
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Date: 8/16/2013 8:36:00 AM
A lap full of warm animals are some true friends. They don't betray. I would love to see a giant Panda, but from afar. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:15:00 AM
This is a sweet Poem Sara with touch of a country song. One can imagine how you love your pets with LTC (Love Tender Care).Beautiful write and thank you for your kind comments on my Independence Day Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:15:00 AM
Well this is cute Sara,,, I was looking for your young man, old man. I read Don Johnson's Swore ;},,,, so now I'm in search of yours ;}
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Date: 8/15/2013 9:18:00 PM
Awww, how are your pets? I bet they are happy if they are both on your lap! I just love how your dog licks the cat's ears, that's so cute! Our dog thinks he's the big stuff, but his is only 4.5 lbs, and is terrified when he encounters a dog near him, but he'll bark like crazy! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a positive piece, Great work!!
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Date: 8/15/2013 8:56:00 PM
I love the imagery, and the way all creatures are fair in this poem... kind of cute... then again, Pandas cats and puppies always are.. xox...PD
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:53:00 PM
How delightful, Sara... Tomorrow morning I think I'll have breakfast in the veranda... Terry (and thank you for your kind comments)
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Date: 8/15/2013 1:10:00 PM
i love how you stir nature through your poetic eyes, sara... how are you?.. this flows on my lap!..:) hugggs
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