Out On The Porch

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Picture # 1 Out on the front porch Sits the unoccupied rocking chair Soaking up the rising sun Sounds surround as day begins Come friend, sit, settle, scribe

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2024 5:31:00 PM

I like this kind of quietude, sara...your wonderful imagery and use of alliteration define this piece!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/15/2024 3:40:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 7/14/2024 5:08:00 AM

So welcoming and beautiful, youv written very well dear sara, using slight alliterations to paint such picturesque imagery! I love “ soaking up the rising sun” how soul warming: pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light. Best wishes for the contest

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/14/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, IE, for the best wishes. I appreciate the visit. Sara K