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Out On The Porch

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Out on the front porch Sits the unoccupied rocking chair Soaking up the rising sun Sounds surround as day begins Come friend, sit, settle, scribe
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Kerr Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:11 AM
A majestic piece oozing warmth, charm, and beguiling imagery. A firm favourite of mine among your many gems, Sara. You read Brazen Outside Lodgers Part Two which is a wonderful gesture on your part. Much appreciated Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 8:58 AM
I am honored that you would fav this one. Thank you so much, Howard. I appreciate the visit and your special comments. Sara K
Onclaud Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 5:31 PM
I like this kind of quietude, sara...your wonderful imagery and use of alliteration define this piece!
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind review of my work. Sara K
Empress Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 5:08 AM
So welcoming and beautiful, youv written very well dear sara, using slight alliterations to paint such picturesque imagery! I love “ soaking up the rising sun” how soul warming: pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light. Best wishes for the contest
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, IE, for the best wishes. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
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