Out of Water

Moving reflection a flying cormorant on silky water. for the "Out of Water" contest Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/member_contest_details.aspx?ContestID=6186

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/9/2016 12:57:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/9/2016 3:28:00 PM

Thank you!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/5/2015 12:32:00 AM

Archontoula, Nice Haiku and congrats. Mohan

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 4/5/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Mohan, for dropping by and for your kind words.

John Lawless

Date: 4/4/2015 2:49:00 PM

Nice take on the theme using a tricky form, congrats.

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 4/5/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/4/2015 2:29:00 PM

Archontoula, wonderful imagery in this strong haiku, they are so difficult to do well. Congratulations on your placement. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 4/5/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thank you ever so much for my placement. All contributions were indeed wonderful. I am honoured.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/4/2015 2:35:00 AM

You caught that haiku moment! :D Kim

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 3/4/2015 10:12:00 AM

Thanks, Kim!

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2015 9:42:00 PM

very deep, for a haiku. I like it SKAT

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 3/1/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, SKAT, haiku can be deep. I hope mine is, at least.... Love the paintings that accompany them, too. Laconic in their brushstrokes, images and poems alike...