Out of Water

Moving reflection
a flying cormorant
on silky water.






for the "Out of Water" contest

Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/member_contest_details.aspx?ContestID=6186
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Makama Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
Alexandropoulou Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you!
Chutani Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Archontoula, Nice Haiku and congrats. Mohan
Alexandropoulou Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Thank you, Mohan, for dropping by and for your kind words.
Lawless Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Nice take on the theme using a tricky form, congrats.
Alexandropoulou Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Thank you, John!
Harper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Archontoula, wonderful imagery in this strong haiku, they are so difficult to do well. Congratulations on your placement. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576
Alexandropoulou Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Thank you ever so much for my placement. All contributions were indeed wonderful. I am honoured.
Nunez Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:35 AM
You caught that haiku moment! :D Kim
Alexandropoulou Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Thanks, Kim!
A  Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:42 PM
very deep, for a haiku. I like it SKAT
Alexandropoulou Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Thank you, SKAT, haiku can be deep. I hope mine is, at least.... Love the paintings that accompany them, too. Laconic in their brushstrokes, images and poems alike...
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