Out of the Cold Dawn

Out of the cold dawn
The birds come flocking the sun
Friendship brims with light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 5, 2010 at 3:11 PM
I really like the uplifting last line. Leaves the reader with something to smile about. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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November 4, 2010 at 1:38 PM
The warmth of friendship can take the chill out of any "cold dawn." An upbeat haiku that brings me a smile. Love, Carolyn
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