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Out of the Cold Dawn

Out of the cold dawn The birds come flocking the sun Friendship brims with light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/5/2010 3:11:00 PM
I really like the uplifting last line. Leaves the reader with something to smile about. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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Date: 11/4/2010 1:38:00 PM
The warmth of friendship can take the chill out of any "cold dawn." An upbeat haiku that brings me a smile. Love, Carolyn
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