David Kavanagh Poet Rhyme

Out of Stocks

I bought myself, some gifts today 
     drove home, but threw them way
    No big surprise, I’m losing the will
    offloading things, brings me thrills
    Again desperate, must order more 
   getting funny looks, in the gun store 


Bite Size Poem no.8 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
19/06/2021

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Christopher Flaherty June 21, 2021 at 4:09 PM Retail therapy Short lived David Kavanagh June 21, 2021 at 9:52 PM A nervous breakdown in the making, and the character is getting fixated with guns, need I say more, cheers David

Jenna Logan June 19, 2021 at 4:12 PM Should I make a call for help for you, David? That's quite a bite of words. David Kavanagh June 19, 2021 at 8:57 PM Thanks Jenna, I’m fine, but this character I’m portraying is on the verge of a breakdown, the whole idea was to sound detached, yet menacingly volatile, the word choice is purposely unsettling, cheers David

Sotto Poet June 19, 2021 at 3:10 PM A well-written bite-sized poem that conveys both joy and dismay. Nevertheless, we need to earn more money to regain the thrilling quality and a certain degree of self-esteem, attitude, and confidence. Have a great weekend, dear friend, and best wishes for the contest. David Kavanagh June 19, 2021 at 3:27 PM Thank you Lasaad, I have recently watched the falling down movie starring Michael Douglas, and was just trying to capture, the lead up to a nervous breakdown, cheers David, right back at you for the weekend