Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Rhyme

Out of Sight Out of Mind

You charm me for days with words you text
Then I'm completely ignored, left feeling perplexed
Maybe you're afraid that we're moving with haste
But totally ignoring me leaves me with a bitter taste

If you need your space then kindly inform me so
I have a life and other places I can go
Consideration and communication are high on my list
Please don't make me feel like for days I don't exist

When I'm with you it's a completely different story
I'm like a rare flower basking in your glory
Attentive and captivating you make me feel unique
Maybe part of the allure is your baffling mystique 

We all seem to want what we can not possess
But a relationship without time will not be a success
So when I'm out of sight..... keep me in your mind
Or you may find yourself single, for I will leave you behind!

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Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2015 at 11:47 PM CECILIA, this is a nice little win. always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison July 16, 2015 at 6:29 PM You tell him girl - great write many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Cecilia Macfarlane July 17, 2015 at 1:06 PM Thanks Jan. Hugs

Kim Merryman July 15, 2015 at 8:57 PM Well said, Cecilia! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Cecilia Macfarlane July 17, 2015 at 1:06 PM Thanks Kim. Hugs

Skat A July 14, 2015 at 1:14 AM Cecilia Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. SKAT Cecilia Macfarlane July 17, 2015 at 1:07 PM Thank you so much for my placement in your contest Skat. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2013 at 11:55 PM gosh, no matter where I click,it is a poem of yours I have read. I sure hope to see you post some new ones soon. I'm dying to see what you come up with next!

Barbara Dumbovic October 31, 2012 at 7:45 PM how true i enjoyed reading your poem

Don Johnson October 17, 2012 at 3:18 AM a warning to be attentive sweet, or ladylove may leave discrete, so cling on tight to dodge delete...

Joy Wellington October 13, 2012 at 6:38 PM That's sure telling him...no way should a person hang their hat on someone who only thinks about them when the person is at their side. That simple all that attracts him is what his eyes sees in front of him. NOT ACCEPTABLE!! Great write, Cecilia. One love. Joy Wells

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2012 at 11:51 AM Great work..I especially like and agree with the last stanza second line..In all relationships one has to devote time to the other person or the relationship dies..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Harry Horsman October 11, 2012 at 10:17 AM i like this, told as it is, cannot did much more truthful than that.. love your honesty Cecilia... Harry Horsman October 11, 2012 at 10:18 AM get not did (sorry about that)

Dan Kearley October 10, 2012 at 12:25 PM I like the story here... Sounds like he's trying to keep you wrapped around his finger? Don't trip,and fall! :o)

Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2012 at 12:14 AM You let him have it, lady!! I hope it is not that same guy from before? How is it going, my friend?

Jack Ellison October 6, 2012 at 8:52 AM A heartfelt plea! Love the last line... great write Ceecillia! Love and hugs, Jack xox

Tim Ryerson October 5, 2012 at 3:35 PM I hearing you, Cecilia!...Been there, done that!...Love hurts sometimes, doesn't it? (but who can live without it?)...First line of last verse is my favorite (and so very true!) - Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2012 at 2:49 AM Love the title and it is a very well written poem Cecilia- oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Crestfallen . October 4, 2012 at 4:05 PM Good write. And i was going to inform you that there is a song that you may like that has this saying in it. You probably have heard it, and based the title on it. But if you don't, then it is called Legohouse by Ed Sheeran. He's great. Cecilia Macfarlane October 4, 2012 at 4:19 PM No I have never heard of this song. I just played it on YouTube....not bad, thanks for sharing that with me.