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Out of Sight

where in heaven does life go to ~ pondered the prophet of doom one day searching through his empty future ~ instead of looking the other way By David Kavanagh

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Terry Flood

Date: 12/23/2021 3:28:00 PM

If we don’t stay where they put us when we’re done, I’ve got my eyes on the gates rather than the furnace. Trouble is, I only feel about half the age of my birth certificate (it must have been written in anticipation) so I’m not practicing my grovelling just yet. Thought provoking Monoku, David. Terry

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/24/2021 2:03:00 AM

No point in grovelling Terry, would only make things worse lol, perhaps a good meaningful poem would suffice as a plea bargain, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

Out of Mind Blindly going the Wrong Way

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2021 1:36:00 PM

That damn Irish channel was half Irish half English in the past, I think because they used to beat the crap out of us in an English speaking school for not knowing the Irish language, didn’t exactly help matters, it was a messed up system like S.A

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/22/2021 1:28:00 PM

Exactly David Different outcome every time My full name is Christopher Television Times Flaherty. Funny you answer the questions I want to ask you sometimes without even having to ask. You named your t.v channel here i pressume to think is like Ireland and we have the same telly don't quite actually know why. In S.A growing up we had half day t.v alternating between 1 day English 1 day Afrikaans

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2021 1:02:00 PM

Absolutely Christopher, that is only a simulation of one possible outcome, if they retried it over and over the result would not be the same every time, Telly addict heh

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/22/2021 12:54:00 PM

Hehehe Perhaps your right David maybe I am or do or spend far to much time watching .t.v

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/22/2021 12:52:00 PM

Exactly David Ever seen Tipping Point At the end they offer to trade 3 more counter's for the money. To try and win the Jackpot prize. And if they don't they play it out anyway. But that isn't to say that is how it would play out if they took the trade. Future is only a concept until it's actually happened

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2021 11:42:00 AM

Yes indeed Christopher your life goes into the past, the future only exists as a concept, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/22/2021 8:45:00 AM

Words of wisdom David, but sometimes I wish I had more in front than I have behind lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2021 8:53:00 AM

Well Tom, that comment you just made there speaks volumes about how much your enjoying life, unlike my prophet of doom, cheers David