Out of Place

I live a life, a life without belonging 
I am a puzzle stripped of five pieces 
My heart feels a deep longing 
To escape from these shackles without releases 
Secluded in a cage that’s locked, but has no key 
It feels like I am fading into nothing, nothing at all 
And I cannot get rid of the anger deep inside of me 
I cannot run away; my back’s against the wall 
With no source of rhythm I cannot keep up the pace 
I try to keep in control, but all these emotions want to be released 
I cannot move on anymore because I am out of place 
My will is continuously being decreased 
I am the bird that cries all night begging for a chance, but will never be set free 
Because I am different from you; is there anyone in this world that is out of place like me 
Or am I the only caged bird that cannot seek the fix that’s missing and keeping me awake crying all night long.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/29/2014 10:59:00 PM
WOW, I know this feeling, Love the poem Jacob,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:05:00 PM
You are definitely not alone, My poems are written from experiences I've had. Emotions used in poetry can be felt by readers and u have rocked that for sure. Amazing!! J
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:00:00 PM
Such a sincere and deep poem...I bet there are a lot of teenagers that can relate to this poem. Beautiful work Jacob...Keep writing :) Ana
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Date: 11/18/2014 1:59:00 PM
I feel the same. I was intrigued by this.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 11/18/2014 2:49:00 PM
I have now! Love it.
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Jacob Frey
Date: 11/18/2014 2:04:00 PM
I'm glad I could intrigue you with one of my works, have you read my new one yet
Date: 11/18/2014 9:36:00 AM
Quite an image you built. Keep writting. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on avatars and names to read others poems. Leave a comment and they will have a permanent link back to yours.
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Jacob Frey
Date: 11/18/2014 10:31:00 AM
thank you very much
Date: 11/17/2014 12:05:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jacob - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jacob Frey
Date: 11/18/2014 10:32:00 AM
thank you I will continue to write, and please do so
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