Out of Gas

I’m staring at my notebook;
The page is lined but blank.
I’m like the driver with no map
Or gas within the tank.

I’ve got the engine started
But I have no place to go,
So I’m sitting here in neutral
With my spirits sinking low.

It doesn’t happen often
That my mind will not engage,
Yet my musings somehow managed
To get words upon the page.

It’s almost time for typing,
For what finally seems clear
Is that sometimes simply idling
Is enough to get in gear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/12/2023 3:59:00 PM
Know the feeling well, Ilene. I like the way your last few lines prove their own point. When I’m in that boat (er… car) I try just writing gibberish. Sometimes I get a line to work with and sometimes I get a fully fledged poem… and sometimes I get gibberish. Your approach was far more refined than mine. Like it lots!
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Date: 10/9/2023 8:20:00 PM
That last stanza says it all, Ilene! And it works for me when my poetry "engine" prefers to idle though my mind is on the gas peddle! Enjoyed./ Maurice
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Date: 10/9/2023 5:00:00 PM
Even on idle Ilene, you still create a great poem.
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:08:00 AM
- ... let the "car" rest a bit, Ilene ... fill up your mind ... lovely written :) - hugs
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Date: 10/8/2023 9:58:00 PM
You are a gas Ilene lol I can relate big time my pen has run out of ink but am sure a gassy poem will explode from my pen when my motor gets running again , wonderful metaphors lol hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2023 6:09:00 PM
I liked the humor and the thought. A car is sometimes the most positive thing in one's life.
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Date: 10/8/2023 3:24:00 PM
i feel like that these days, where to find gas ? great metaphor, thanks poet, take care
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Date: 10/8/2023 1:37:00 PM
great metaphors for it, Ilene. May your tank stay ever full
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Date: 10/8/2023 1:24:00 PM
Brilliant!!! Enjoyed reading this. Well done.
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