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Out of Dodge

I can not wait to never wait, the advent of change. Let our memories fade and forever decay. Even though my heart is aching, I'm leaving you behind. These idol hands are drowning beneath the depths of you and I. Belief is true insight. There may not be a sign when it's time. Even though my heart is aching, I'm leaving you behind. These idol hands are drowning beneath the depths of you and I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 8:53:00 PM
Hello Clayton, :-) stopping by to meet you and your poetry. i like the first line.. a contradiction within itself..LOL... ""I can not wait to never wait"" a deep one..LINDA
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Date: 12/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer
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