Pam Deremer Poet I do not know?

Out of Control

My life is swirling down the drain...
I feel like I may go insane!
First one problem...then another...
I feel like I may even smother.
Between the weight of stress each day...
I wonder what the doc might say?
Take one of these pills, for it may help...If not...
there is always something else.
I can't see sunlight through the fog...
I've cried so much...I'm water logged!
Will these problems ever end...
so I might have a chance to mend.
                                                      P.R. Deremer

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Tu Tran July 21, 2015 at 1:30 PM POEMS IS NOT JUST WORDS BUT EXPRESSION FROM OUR HEART. I FEEL WHAT YOU FELT. EVERY POEMS THAT I HAVE READ FROM YOU HAS SOOO MUCH TENDER EMOTIONS. I LOVE IT. AS YOU CAN SEE, I'M READING ALL OF YOUR POEMS ONE BY ONE. THANKS FOR SHARING

Yolanda Scott July 16, 2015 at 9:09 PM God is mending you through your writing. Let the love inside strengthen you through all your problems and all your pain. You are not alone!!! Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.