Out of Breath

I ran till I was out of breath
and I know there's nothing left
it's called hitting the wall
now my love is on this ledge
didn't have the leading edge
never did if I recall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 10:01 PM
Pretty poignant stuff.. luv your honesty with this verse... food for thought too.. keep on writing... Linda-Marie
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November 5, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Love this...
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