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Out of Breath

I ran till I was out of breath and I know there's nothing left it's called hitting the wall now my love is on this ledge didn't have the leading edge never did if I recall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/5/2009 10:01:00 PM
Pretty poignant stuff.. luv your honesty with this verse... food for thought too.. keep on writing... Linda-Marie
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Date: 11/5/2009 2:18:00 PM
Love this...
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