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Out My Window

Gazing out with midnight half-dreams a velvet sky ripples on the frosted glass stars peeping through the open window the visage veiled in long shadows of grass. pondering over stories with abrupt end a journal of thoughts in crevasses of mind fireflies sprinkling flecks of fragile glows awakens a young girl from years behind. several windows now open...one by one she holds the full moon hiding in clouds painting vivid dreams on a gossamer sky curtain rising moments of cheering crowds she said, wait I am coming I can see you seeing me. a smile knocked at the window pane and she said, I am now free. sitting at the window seat of her car winter changed to autumn and spring, waves of goodbyes rolled... and said, Wait, some changes only time can bring.

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Date: 8/29/2023 6:50:00 PM
Artfully presented Debani, it flowed so peacefully from start to finish and showed something we could share with you.
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Date: 8/28/2023 3:12:00 PM
So wonderfully written Debjani - marvelous images, word pairings and very creative expression. Congratulations on your win with this very special poem.
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Date: 8/20/2023 10:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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