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Out In the October Sun

` Colorful autumn leaves piling, scarves wrapped and jackets are zipped Pumpkins with faces are smiling, noses and cheeks rosy nipped Cinnamon spice on the breezes, fireplace embers aglow Taking a walk ‘fore it freezes, hoping and wishing for snow Feeling the chill of the season, here on our day filled with fun Not even needing a reason, out in the October sun Written for the: October Sun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/25/2019 12:41:00 AM
Wow, you bring elation to the season and warm our hearts ~ If we could all take a stroll together...what fun that would be ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:18:00 AM
I think that would be a lot of fun, can you imagine the poems that would come out of that stroll? : ) Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 10/24/2019 7:57:00 PM
you paint a beautiful picture, and i love the romance of a fireplace and the scent of wood burning...but, you can keep the snow...one year we had it before halloween, somewhere i have pictures of snowmen with pumpkin heads, anyway great penning my friend, best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sandy. Ok, I'll keep the snow if we ever get any down here. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 10/24/2019 5:03:00 PM
Send those cinnamon spice breezes (our) Midwest way, please. Fed Express 'em! Charming, my friend, 'for no reason.' Love it, Chris. Ciao, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:14:00 AM
I will overnight them my friend. : ) Thanks so much Gershon
Date: 10/24/2019 5:02:00 PM
Nice entry, Chris. God bless you, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina.
Date: 10/24/2019 4:34:00 PM
Such a fun poem Chris. This brought a smile :) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. Thank you for all of the kindness you show me.

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