Out Beyond

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" Out beyond ideas of right and wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there." Rumi


Beyond the law's rights and wrongs, there is heaven; I'll meet you there. 

                                                                  My interpretation

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Jude Herrick

Date: 11/1/2023 4:53:00 PM

I agree. Though there are many fields, the field that matters is the final reward (of the lightfield of goodness.) Integrity [Looking forward to perusing your works Sara]

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2023 6:27:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jude for your kind review of my work. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2023 5:00:00 PM

Oh to be where things are right!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2023 4:38:00 AM

Kim, I think in heaven we are going to only want to do what is right or we do only what is right. Our only thoughts are going to be to do what Jesus wants us to do. He would not lead us astray. Thank you for dropping by . Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/30/2023 5:34:00 AM

Heaven is so out of our reach, that it is a mystery to us. All I know is that there is light and happiness.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2023 6:28:00 AM

Yes, Victor. I think what we think we know and what will be in heaven are two different things. I do know there will be love, Jesus, God the Father, and The Holy Spirit will be there, and the tree of life will be there and a river flowing through heaven because the Bible tells us this much. Thanks for dropping by and leaving such a nice comment. Sara