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Out and Safe

Miraculous is how it seemed That they escaped alive, Those 12 boys and their coach, Who many thought would not survive. For 18 days they languished In a cave beneath the ground With raging waters rising near The place where they were found. The Navy Seals are credited With rescuing the team, Reversing parents’ nightmares Into one amazing dream. The world held its collective breath While all this was transcending And let out whoops of great relief To hear the happy ending.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/18/2018 5:31:00 AM
This was so amazing; it brought the world together.
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Date: 7/12/2018 6:40:00 PM
At first I was trying to figure out how you could be out and safe at the same time, in baseball that is. :) This is like the feel good story of the decade. You recapped it as only you can do. Each stanza was skillfully drawn to it's own conclusion. Enjoyed. And Amen. A lot of prayers in this one. :)
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:39:00 PM
Good is still happening in the world.. I love how this feels!
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:08:00 PM
Documented in a sweet poem...Nice one ilene
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Date: 7/10/2018 4:42:00 PM
I am amazed they all survived and it is wonderful news they are all safe, i can[t imagine the anguish of both the children and their parents during these long weeks not knowing if they will ever see eachother again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2018 4:24:00 PM
So glad! As mothers we feel deeply! I think about the coach too.
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