Our World Is Crying

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Our planet is weeping, and faith is at low and vacillate.
A severe risk as a result of the global warming challenge 
Concerns have arisen as an outcome of a wavering climate.

It is not due to hairspray or baby oil; it's our fate.
Rapidly melting Arctic glaciers are causing damage.
Our planet is weeping, and faith is at low and vacillate.

Carbon from fossil fuels is the major emission element.
A ferocious shockwave of metabolic blaze stage.
Concerns have arisen as an outcome of a wavering climate.

Concerns around the ozone hole depletion sprout.
Sea level is rising due to melting ice and warmer plage.
Our planet is weeping, and faith is at low and vacillate.

War and turmoil look trivial compared to climate.
Despite that our kids are at risk, newly threats emerge.
Concerns have arisen as an outcome of a wavering climate.

 
To allow plant life to thrive, we need to alter our zest.
Retain the air safe and car-free with zero carbon discharge.
Our planet is weeping, and faith is at low and vacillate.
Concerns have arisen as an outcome of a wavering climate.


Written April 20, 2021

A MAJOR WORLD PROBLEM Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/23/2021 11:47:00 AM
Well composed villanelle Lasaad, we can see all these problems, why can't our world leaders see what we can see. Profit and greed comes to mind, best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/23/2021 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Tom appreciate your kind words, I think that our world leaders are aware of this important issues For example, improvements to energy efficiency and vehicle fuel economy, increases in wind and solar power, biofuels from organic waste, setting a price on carbon, and protecting forests are all potent ways to reduce the amount of carbon dioxide and other gases trapping heat on the plane.
Date: 4/22/2021 7:26:00 PM
Dearest Lasaad - Your effort here has produced a great result. I see this is your first Vilanelle as was mine. Whew! I wish you the best in the contest. - Ken
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Date: 4/21/2021 5:31:00 AM
Very important points you give us. You did very well.
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