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Our Wedding Moment

Your lotus like hand resting on my hand amid the chanting of hymns..... first ever touch of you This wedding moment scripted in Heaven culminated in happy marriage of two hearts. © kashinath karmakar ===================================== Placement:HM; (May 2011) Contest:Any 2,4,6 0r 8 line form Sponsor:Brian Strand By:kashinath karmakar (22nd March 2011)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:04:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 8:06:00 PM

Kash, this one is very special. Sorry it didn't score higher than an HM. It would have with me!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/8/2011 6:10:00 PM

one happy woman to see this! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/8/2011 5:25:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Kashinath. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 3:11:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your HM in this contest with this wonderful entry my friend.. super honor ..to enjoy luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2011 2:05:00 PM

i just love this, kashi... 7 cheers for you! :) brilliant!.. huggs

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/24/2011 1:05:00 PM

This is a beautiful description of a wedding... I enjoyed this greatly! You are welcome for the comments, Kashinath, very well deserved:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 10:29:00 AM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Kashinath. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2011 6:13:00 AM

Such a romantic work..Enjoyed reading very much..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting with such encouraging words....Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2011 5:34:00 AM

Precious words to describe your lovely wedding ceremony Kashinath.. such sensitive and moving lines .. true luv is so evident here..good luck in the contest my friend.. a rare beauty this piece luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 5:26:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Kashinath. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 10:43:00 PM

Is this really true, it's the first time you ever touched was at the wedding. Very intereresting. Very beautiful picture you painted also and I should think it will do very well in the contest. Soupmail

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2011 12:17:00 PM

thanks for the entry, kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2011 11:00:00 AM

I really like the innocence you conveyed when you describe the wedding moment as your "first ever touch." You also set a joyful mood with the hymns. Lovely kimo, Kashinath. Best wishes for success in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/22/2011 10:46:00 AM

such lyrical , sweet tone to this , kashi.. winning luck to you.. come visit! :) huggs, nette

George Aul

Date: 3/22/2011 10:46:00 AM

A touching write............George

Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2011 8:27:00 AM

Very sweet and romantic poem : ) Jack