Kash Poet Poet Kimo

Our Wedding Moment

Your lotus like hand resting on my hand
               amid the chanting of hymns.....
                  first ever touch of you


      This wedding moment scripted in Heaven
                      culminated in happy
               marriage of two hearts.



© kashinath karmakar 
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Placement:HM; (May 2011)

Contest:Any 2,4,6 0r 8 line form
 
Sponsor:Brian Strand

By:kashinath karmakar (22nd March 2011)

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2011 at 5:04 AM A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2011 at 8:06 PM Kash, this one is very special. Sorry it didn't score higher than an HM. It would have with me!

Debbie Guzzi June 8, 2011 at 6:10 PM one happy woman to see this! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Ralph Taylor June 8, 2011 at 5:25 PM Congrats on your HM, Kashinath. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 3:11 PM Congrats Kash on your HM in this contest with this wonderful entry my friend.. super honor ..to enjoy luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2011 at 2:15 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, kashinath

Nette Onclaud June 8, 2011 at 2:05 PM i just love this, kashi... 7 cheers for you! :) brilliant!.. huggs

Carol Fillmore March 24, 2011 at 1:05 PM This is a beautiful description of a wedding... I enjoyed this greatly! You are welcome for the comments, Kashinath, very well deserved:)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2011 at 10:29 AM Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Kashinath. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick March 23, 2011 at 6:13 AM Such a romantic work..Enjoyed reading very much..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting with such encouraging words....Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 23, 2011 at 5:34 AM Precious words to describe your lovely wedding ceremony Kashinath.. such sensitive and moving lines .. true luv is so evident here..good luck in the contest my friend.. a rare beauty this piece luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2011 at 5:26 AM I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Kashinath. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2011 at 10:43 PM Is this really true, it's the first time you ever touched was at the wedding. Very intereresting. Very beautiful picture you painted also and I should think it will do very well in the contest. Soupmail

Dr.Ram Mehta March 22, 2011 at 12:17 PM thanks for the entry, kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire March 22, 2011 at 11:00 AM I really like the innocence you conveyed when you describe the wedding moment as your "first ever touch." You also set a joyful mood with the hymns. Lovely kimo, Kashinath. Best wishes for success in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

George Aul March 22, 2011 at 10:46 AM A touching write............George

Nette Onclaud March 22, 2011 at 10:46 AM such lyrical , sweet tone to this , kashi.. winning luck to you.. come visit! :) huggs, nette

Jack Horne March 22, 2011 at 8:27 AM Very sweet and romantic poem : ) Jack

Carrie Richards March 22, 2011 at 8:23 AM This is so perfect....gentle and sweet!!

Kash Poet March 22, 2011 at 6:47 AM Yes,it was OUR wedding moment.