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Midnight moon and nights lonesome sound Sparkling stars and clouds surround Whispering meadow filled with flowers Whiling away many late night hours The Kansas plains roll like a stream Wheat fields wave like the ocean in a dream The crimson dawn of a fresh spring morning A storm raging in and tornado warnings Mountains that stretch to the heavens above Red birds calling and the wings of a dove A bale of hay standing near the road The view from the bluff with wetlands below Our walks together always made my heart sing But your smile to me was the most beautiful thing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2009 7:48:00 AM
A faultless poem.
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Date: 3/15/2009 6:29:00 PM
Interesting imagery and nice use of alliteration for a beautiful view. It's amazing what a smile can do for one's day. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 3/15/2009 8:31:00 AM
Makes me want to stand along a road, and smile at the Kansas sun! Nicely done, Lolita! ~love, Carrie
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Date: 3/15/2009 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful write Lena.. loved the flow of this piece and how you took mind along with you.. the verses worked well with the rhyming...well done.
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