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Our Two Hearts

The spark of distant stars jump-starts
     the rhythmic beating of our two hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jay Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 10:00 PM
congrates
Achara Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:27 PM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Joyful! Congratulations on top win!
Achara Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Thank you.
Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 10:41 PM
A heart's delight!! Congratulations.
Achara Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Thank you.
Kitchin Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Chetta, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful poem.
Achara Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Thank you.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 1:46 PM
Lovely Chetta, congratulations on your win :-)
Achara Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 3:00 PM
Thank you.
Rose  Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:24 PM
so vibrant colorful and beautiful !
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:02 PM
excellent contest entry! PS just a thought...the 'title may need to be changed to OUR (not out) probably just a typo.
Achara Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:04 PM
You are right. How did I miss that typo?
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