Our Twinkling Star

Our Twinkling Star

twinkle, twinkle little star
we need not ponder who you are

each night when we go out
we give my dad a shout

he looks down from afar
cause he’s our twinkling star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 1, 2015 at 2:56 AM
This is very touching, Rochelle - A beautiful thought! My best regards. :) john
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May 6, 2015 at 5:08 AM
Lovely poem, Rochelle. It's a sweet way to remember those beloved ones who passed away. Pleased to have read your first poem; hope I will find time to visit again. // Thank you for commenting on my senryu "Love is Free". All the best. // paul
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May 10, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Hello Paul, thanks for checking in on me. ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
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