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Our Temple Pond

Clean Serene All eggs spawned Like pure love-bond Share, care, live, let live Fish, frogs, snails, snakes, worms new Filled with faith, hope, love, trust, Meet, mate; love, hate, lust; Like the heaven No leaven! Amber! Pure! 20 August, 2021 Merse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 8/21/2021 7:00:00 AM
Perfect portrayal of temple pond.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/22/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/21/2021 1:41:00 AM
You have described a temple pond as it is, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/21/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/20/2021 1:02:00 PM
nice one Christuraj! Temple ponds are special in India!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/21/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/20/2021 10:23:00 AM
I am immersed within each line, well said.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/21/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/20/2021 9:40:00 AM
Great one for the contest... Nicely done... Good luck in the contest...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/21/2021 6:43:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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