Christuraj Alex Poet Verse

Our Temple Pond

Clean
Serene
All eggs spawned
Like pure love-bond
Share, care, live, let live
Fish, frogs, snails, snakes, worms new

Filled with faith, hope, love, trust,
Meet, mate; love, hate, lust;
Like the heaven
No leaven!
Amber!
Pure!



20 August, 2021
Merse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Rama Balasubramanian August 21, 2021 at 7:00 AM Perfect portrayal of temple pond. Christuraj Alex August 22, 2021 at 9:36 AM Thank you very much.

Joanna Daniel August 21, 2021 at 1:41 AM You have described a temple pond as it is, Christuraj:) Christuraj Alex August 21, 2021 at 6:44 AM Thank you very much.

Krish Radhakrishna August 20, 2021 at 1:02 PM nice one Christuraj! Temple ponds are special in India! Christuraj Alex August 21, 2021 at 6:44 AM Thank you very much.

DM Babbit August 20, 2021 at 10:23 AM I am immersed within each line, well said. Christuraj Alex August 21, 2021 at 6:44 AM Thank you very much.

Supraja Kannan August 20, 2021 at 9:40 AM Great one for the contest... Nicely done... Good luck in the contest... Christuraj Alex August 21, 2021 at 6:43 AM Thank you very much.