"our Sun"

Im following the sun today
The clouds you see have went away
Its been to long since we talked and read
Ive missed your voice inside my head
Im sorry for the rain that came down
Its no ones fault, but you know Im so proud
Your smile I see in your letters tell me maybe its ok
I never left but we are so far away
For tomorrow we work on what we have done
With hope it brings us closer under our sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 12, 2010 at 1:20 PM
This almost could be put to music...lyrics to a beautiful son!! Well done, Michael! Love, Carrie
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