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Brilliancy of Autumn 
in leaves of amber rum 
a wood plank memory 
swings into our story 
I recall the essence   
of our adolescence 



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August 21, 2021
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Skelly Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 9:17 AM
This is lovely: Brilliancy of Autumn in leaves of amber rum... This start sets the tone of the verse. Very nice indeed...Delice
Omar Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 12:39 AM
Well done.
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Beautiful imagery of autumn , Mystic.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 10:41 PM
Lovely image poem, so descriptive. Hugs
Ludovice Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:12 PM
waw very nice!! I love the way you turn words into images!
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