Our Sky

Look up to the sky Until you begin to wonder why Wonder why we grow, be, then die All of these answers, up in our sky Dream and believe that you can fly One day, further than our sky Keep your head held up on-high Keep on smiling, stay focused, don't sigh Look up to our sky Fly high Further than our sky

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2016 10:24:00 PM

Jonathan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 12:04:00 PM

Hi Jonathan, from Lincoln UK... thank you for the reply. LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 2/24/2016 6:56:00 PM

Lovely rhyme John - I just wish we could all live in peace and harmony under our sky:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 7:13:00 PM

In reply to your comment to Silent One you can edit your poem quite simply - if you go to the left hand side of the of the page - click on 'my poems' and the edit feature is there :-) I'm in the UK too on the Isle of Man:-) hugs Jan xx

Jonathan Davis
Date: 2/24/2016 7:08:00 PM

Wouldn't it be a better place if we did. 'Our Sky' now you got me thinking ?? and thank you so much for the hugs, I return them right back

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 9:05:00 AM

Hi, Jonathan, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jonathan Davis
Date: 2/24/2016 9:10:00 AM

How can I edit my poem? Also I am well thank you. From Lincoln, UK.